All Comments on 'Requiem for a Night's Sleep'

Try long necks and country songs, that does the trick

for me. Just one thing, it's never too early for the

Stones, they are up away. A lot going on in this poem.

I think that fits the moment well. sandspike

Sounds like a night familiar

That catches you

Twelve hours later...

like a nosy neighbour. This is written with so much feeling it's almost too intimate for comfort but that's because you paint the scene so clearly. Ain't love wonderful!

Tess

What can I say about this poem? It's a hundred miles away from sucking? I don't know. I love it and I can't think of anything else to say despite all the coffee I just drank.