All Comments on 'Reluctance'

oh god for some reason I need to go to the gym and then buy some alpha hydroxy something or another...

Great choice of lines!!! potent poem

what a line you chose when you picked the vagina one. lol But you did a great job with it! :)

Good grief what a way to start a poem. I loved it. The whole poem is err well a lil distubing (in reference to it being your mom).. but I still loved it. I loved your imagery and it flowed great. You made the *borrowed* lines seamless.. More Please~~!!

Just raw fucking honesty. Feelings most of us have but few will admit let alone confront. And well written to boot.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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