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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
The swooshing sound..

of the whip as it misses her arse by a whisker. Pain and pleasure are so close, who knows where it starts.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
mention

this poem was mentioned in the New Poem Reviews Thread

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

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