All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl Sings'

phases in this can't pick which one I like the best...it was great from beginning to end...enjoyed...bluerain

I like this a lot. Your poem is mentioned in today's poetry review thread.

I very much enjoyed your use of language, but what I thought was amazing is the force of will in this. You don't dance around the issue--> you go to it and stay right there until it's done.

Nothing vague (gasp...dare I say it) about this poem. :)

this is a very strong poem, it grabbed me and pulled me right into it. I was even scared for a minute, cool:)

enjoyed this verrry much!

This is some excellent writing! From beginning to end- flawless!

simply wild Du Lac~

awesome write here, amazing versitility

in your poetry, your style of graspping

a reader is always the same, wonderful!

howel.... hehehe!

Quetzalcoati?

Sophmoric, pseudo-intellectual dross clapped together in an attempt to impress poorly read freshman women. It works best if you're a tall male with long hair who can play a guitar LOL

trying too hard