All Comments on 'Pre-Modern Prosody'

by JCSTREET

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
5 *****

Simply superb! It is all so well done, but I especially love the magpies and the twins. Those two strophes are flawless and are easily stand alones. Their final lines wrap things to perfection, like bacon around an oyster!

A marvelous composition! Thank you for an excellent read.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Amazing

work of art. Mentioned in today's review

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Aliens emerge from the ether

and leave dramatic verse! This is a wild read, JC; glad to have you back!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userJCSTREET@JCSTREET
Playing a few Akashic records https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=346675&page=submissions