All Comments on 'Prayer of a Fish'

wriggle little I like a lizard in

OK, why? You know this is inconsistent, with what you have done with the rest of the formatting.

I see two suble messages here, one is derived from content of the poem.

may only

my chevron bones stay here the rest with You

of reading this. Only one part threw me and it was the wriggle little I... other than that, it truly drew me in, I know I will read this several times. Cannot wait to see what else is there ;)