by Remec
yes I have been in that corner....
:)
the purple shag cracked me up. ours is maroon
What are you doing with my sit-n-squeal and my purple shag? Those are sacred. :) Cute poem inspired by a weird place.
Nicely written, Remec. Flowed smoothly..
Although, I probably would have either separated the words into different lines--> "breathe relax breathe listen" OR put commas in between them. Same with "shudder sigh shudder pant"
Other than that, excellent!
Your Poem has been mentioned on the new Poem reviews thread for Tuesday 8th of February. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem.