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by Remec

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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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yes I have been in that corner....

:)

the purple shag cracked me up. ours is maroon

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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What are you doing with my sit-n-squeal and my purple shag? Those are sacred. :) Cute poem inspired by a weird place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Nicely written, Remec. Flowed smoothly..

Although, I probably would have either separated the words into different lines--> "breathe relax breathe listen" OR put commas in between them. Same with "shudder sigh shudder pant"

Other than that, excellent!

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
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Good job, Remec! (snickering at the purple shag)

Trent_DutchTrent_Dutchover 19 years ago
New Poem Reviews

Your Poem has been mentioned on the new Poem reviews thread for Tuesday 8th of February. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem.

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