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Click hereI do my best work in bed1
i'd rather lie prone, knowing better
an urgent bouncing then subdued
witlessly ignorant of my mood
access is licentiously granted
querulous sighs quietly panted
thank you very much
perhaps not your touch
but a breath or a sniff
an odor or a whiff
would be more ideal
like an eight course meal
ending with coffee
and a nice peach cobbler2
1 in "Dream Eating Ass", by sandspike ©2004.
2 in "Healthy Obsession", by The Mutt ©2004.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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I usually avoid rhyming poetry, but this is a great piece. Very cute, with erotic undertones. I really enjoy your work.
Um speechless, at first I must say . . . you are the one who can say, what we thought only we couldn't or is it shouldn't? Gina-Mae your sense of humor is endless, go head you play kitten!!! L.o.L.
Ebby from OM
This made me smile because it reminded me of conversations we had before, and you know my werid sense of humor. ^_^ I like the rythmm to this and could really picture it.