All Comments on 'Perhaps Not Your Touch'

Wow! Keep going, Kid! Thanks!

This reads erotic, gina ;)

great filling between the lines

you connected those two borrowed lines. :)

This made me smile because it reminded me of conversations we had before, and you know my werid sense of humor. ^_^ I like the rythmm to this and could really picture it.

Um speechless, at first I must say . . . you are the one who can say, what we thought only we couldn't or is it shouldn't? Gina-Mae your sense of humor is endless, go head you play kitten!!! L.o.L.

Ebby from OM

I usually avoid rhyming poetry, but this is a great piece. Very cute, with erotic undertones. I really enjoy your work.

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