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by poeticmaster
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Anonymousover 18 years agoThis poem..........
.......is mentioned in the new poems review thread.
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twelveooneover 18 years ago*
Four lines rise above the rest
which vary between good and mediocre
Yes four lines are the best
But, next time you write this stuff
remember the collar choker
"Patterns drawn across her skin
An art form seldom ever shared
Etched in pain and colored in
Because her Master cared"
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