by impressive
I really liked the *shudder*, for some reason in that context it made me think of back hair! lmao, good job!
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I really liked this.. I can picture you sitting there and the faces of the ones you mention rolling thru your mind. the thoughts shared by so many.. spoken by so few... I felt you swimming in my mind.. great identification! That is a sure sign of good poems... when another says... yes.. yes..!
Smiling for your prose was beautiful and clever!
du Lac
Ahhh heck, that was absolutely the best love song I
have ever heard...oh ... I meant poem~
Impressed as always, each poem out
impresses the next, very
Impressive~
I really enjoyed this, the set up, the end, and the way you wove the "other" words in, good job :)
rich, clear, beautifully woven and a bit sad. I see "want" in the verse, and "need" is the title, and I sigh, nodding agreement.
that's awesome. You have an amazing poetic voice! Good work!
so strongly in my own heart. I felt every word, every yearning syllable. As always your words touch the core.
Flipped a coin for the rating. It generously came up to the higher of the two ratings. Not sure I agree.
Gave me a wistful feeling on the first read - so many things matter for it to feel right! Then, it struck me as bold and pointed - yes, my needs can be filled elsewhere, but I choose you to do it. I'll be wondering which it is.
Words that dance with feelings that haven't been asked to dance in a long time.
ty,bd