- Illustrated Poetry
- Lunacy
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- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoDark passions at play here are so well illustrated by this foreboding black Photo. The blue moon sets the mood for this dark and passionate piece.
damppantiesabout 19 years agoI loved the whole atmosphere of the poem. The darkness and the acceptance worked well. And then there's the helplessness. I wonder if the poem speaks in the same way to everybody.
And beautiful picture.
Anonymousabout 19 years agonice to see that you have expressed something with such great meaning in a different way!
Winemaster
hiddenselfover 19 years agoalliterations. Gravitas was predictable and stuffy. Lunar lunatic was overkill. But good idea and colors. Still, I prefer Molten and especially Shadowlands.
Honey123over 19 years agoI liked this style. It made me think of someone typing this poem, throwing it out and someone else finding it...the way the paper was marked, reminded me of crinkled lines..
I loved this ~ "enthralled by the weight of your words" ~
Very nice!!
~Honey
sackover 19 years agoDark and foreboding, just loved it. You deserved and "E" for this poem...a mini-masterpiece!
Sack
Anonymousover 19 years agoIt is a good poem to illustration, but I would like it even better if you would reconsider the dark fancy lettering because it really is very hard to see such a good poem in all that darkness.
sandspikeover 19 years agoThis is an example of 40 words being worth a picture.
A nice poem here that applies to most of us.
