All Comments on 'Looking'

Really cool, G! I like it a lot! Your work is growing by leaps and bounds! Thanks!

Ohh what a cute poem. It shows a lil humor, and loads of imagery. I loved it..More please~~!!

2 great poems - and so similar but yet so different.

Great poetry!

Puts everyone in a situation that one knows and you relive them - remember them when reading this - that's more than great poetry - that's magic!

lovegirl

Defiant, I glare.

He

just

keeps

looking

at

me

And shyly gave a smile

That left my face glowing.

Gina, you are a poet, and little behold to me, you have a lighter side, like a butterfly, I can relate to your course with your mom, but you still are that curiosity in all of us! You captured the essence of moments, WOW, haven't we all been there, with that stare, yeah, what the hell is in his head? No one has ever described to me their exact feelings in the moment dumbfonded, but you seem to pull it all out, very flowingly, without a doubt! Great work, Gina, way to catch spontanuity at it's debt of wonder!

Ebby of OM

you captured a great moment between two people- loved the last line!

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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I'll just join the crowd; I loved it! I love poems which catch moments.