by Liar
Very nice, like this alot, "yellow your geist", and context, pulls up the two other colours.
"but yellow your geist
and black my intentions
all faded
to watered down gray"
was never so much fun....
interesting wording for such a topic...
very well done...zen master of pen~
bygone... bygone...bye I'm gone~
..unwrapping a gift and finding something totally unexpected. I love it! Thank you.
This is good. I like how you made something ordinary, which is used every day, and made it extraordinary with inventive phrasing.
This felt like undulating energy - that make sense? lol, point is, I loved it.
as if as if...
bygones was bygones
and refilled carriages
fresh ink bleeding
could tattoo a stitch
to sew shut this rift
ever again -Loved it!!
High 5!