All Comments on 'Just a Fantasy'

The first two lines are so soft and gentle, and the entire poem follows their lead.

This poem is a lovely read, Really good, I love how I drifted a I read it.

is a perfect word for this poem, so sensual and romantic. You may call yourself savage, but what you wrote here is very tender and feminine. It's cohesive, too--the "linger" line in each stanza pulls it together beautifully. A great read! :)

your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

Wonderful romance and great sensual flow.

I liked how it created images that seemed to float around my head. Are your poems the roadmap?