All Comments on 'Journey'

Good!

'a ship on the ocean, your anchor cast upon the rocky shore.'

thank you, imp, for sharing those feelings in such an eloquent manner.

great job!

*hugs*

v~

I'm a sucker, firstly for portrayals of deep emotions, secondly for expressive language and extensive use of vocabulary, and thirdly, writing that combines those two and leaves me speechless with admiration.

You got me, hook, line and sinker. Mat

Sometimes the simplest parts leap out at me. The passage that connects with where I am at the most right now is this:

"while I did not

choose

to love you, I would not now

change"

I really liked this - I loved the structure, imagery and emotion - well done!

I know you where you are coming from with this poem...I love it - it's like you are in my head.

Great job!!

Honey

I enjoyed this one, impressive; very nice imagery. The line breaking was a bit disruptive to me- it seemed to halt the flow of a very liquid poem.

a poetic icon and very inspirational,

a witty and clever poet with a very

good flare for hitting the heart string

painting two beautiful pictures with

one poem~

Art~

Very stirring poem, having achieved the very difficult task of being applicable to a great many situations. I loved it.

~lucky

when with wonder we

dive

into the tranquil depths of our future

I think this is the third poem of yours that I've read and they all have kick ass endings. And beginnings and middles and everything else.