All Comments on 'Joselyn and Balthazar'

and the universe tilted. TK U MLJ LV NV

An interesting image that rescues the words which could be so much better with a half hour of editing work.

Line illustration sets the mood for two lovers bound together by Love. With peace in their minds ~ and love in their hearts ~ the age old ritual of wedlock is imminent.

I loved the picture, simply great. The poem that followed is good but could be better, think about developing it around a strong image (like the opening line, which is beautiful)

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