All Comments on 'It Comes'

awaiting the morn on the eastern horizon. TK U MLJ LV NV

you are so very impressive...your phrasing...your wit....

you make words a living entity

...and I couldn't find my cave.

ty,bd

Hot and tasty. Great writing.

Syn

is devastating in its perfection. And addicting... Thank you, Imp. LJ.

Not crapola. It's reeks of truths.

Powerful stuff! Beautifully written.

Never thought of it like that. Hmmmmmmmmm.

You have a way with words that I envy! Another excellent piece!

Well captured Imp, the dangers and frustrations of possiblities. "Potential" may well be the world's most complicated curse word. Many layers in this work.

i'm usually not a big fan of poetry, but this one is wonderful. It gave me the feeling of being stalked by something large and... not necessarily cruel, but ruthless.

That was simply wonderful. Beautiful use of language and style. Very impressive, Imp!!!

...captured completely in your powerful use of language!

As is everything by this author....I am speechless!

Passionate prose, filled with the need to warn and explain. Urgency written within, making it a fast read.

Absolutely marvelous. Thank you.

Clearly shows that we are all powerless againt the passing of time. Nicely told!

your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

Liked this one alot Imp, especially the last few lines, really well done!

this was mine:

Tomorrow

stalks us

sleek and hungry

and hot

Good job, Imp! I like it... very much. Thanks.

it does

very nice

inevitable. it will be and little you can do about it feeling, for me, was very strong. beautifully done...

wistfully,

v~