Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Indigo Eyes'

by irishcatsmeow

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 7 Comments
postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Good job

Very nicely done, especially liked the rubber ball gone awry! :)

Miss OatlashMiss Oatlashover 19 years ago
Two lone souls...

...entwine in the magical night.

Lovely! Great feeling!

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in fridays reviews

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Musical!

This one resonates, ICMBoo!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
nicely done

Love these two lines:

His voice slides right off the side of the mountain

bouncing into her veins, a rubber ball gone awry.

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
!

Hey, Irish! I had a lot of fun here. You give great lines to respond to! Let's do it again, wanna?? Thanks!

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
~~

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

----------

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login