by skip.69
::sniffles::
Heart broken on the net. I was, I WAS!!
This was very hot! A lot going on. I tripped a little on the flow...perhaps sticking to an 8, 6, 8, 6 syllable count in each stanza would've help this out.
No harm meant, Christina
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How very interesting to read your works. Knowing nothing much about you. They are all very expressive.
Annora
Skip a sexy read filled with what felt like real lust and longing, let me know if you ever meet her ; )