- Erotic Poetry
- Idared
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Her bottom was an August red
ripe for cutting, plenty for chewing,
fleshy, heedy and tart. She rose
on all four points. I remembered
a game
played with apple stems before partaking,
twisting it with each letter of the alphabet
to find your true love’s name. She rose
again, beckoning and split
and I twisted into her, turning and tumbling,
each letter falling off my lips
to land on her back, g-h-
to bite into her core on i.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoin a nutshell, a very cheeky poem (pardon the pun)
love your SOH
you are one funny gal
xx
champagne1982almost 18 years agothan eating ones, but my mouth watered even as the stem started to break away....
wildsweetonealmost 18 years agoawesome!
the only question i have is did you mean 'heedy' or 'heady'?
wso
Bedtime Storytelleralmost 18 years agoI could see it, feel it, hear it... a sensual delight!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoIda Red, Ida Red
I'm a plumb fool 'bout Ida Red
My ol' Missus swore to me
When she died she'd set me free
She lived so long her head got bald
She took a notion not to die at all
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In any case a nice effort - great images.
Thanks, DJ
The Mystery Valiantalmost 18 years agoOoooooooo! Double-entendrés (not too sure about spelling), all over the place! Definitely sexy and enticing! It sings in some places and catches and traps the reader, willingly! Marvelous!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoah wonderful wonderful! like the double meaning "i"
although I have to confess, I missed the g-h reference (duh I know) Maybe, if it is not just me, you might consider italicizing or using quotes to show the alphabet reading?
rich poem, cc
:)
~as
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoYour talent shines more brightly than ever. Like a northern star viewed from way down Dixie way... take care, sweetie
