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by clutching_calliope

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Your remarkable poem...

was mentioned with in the New Poems Reviews!

S&D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
bottomless

Your talent shines more brightly than ever. Like a northern star viewed from way down Dixie way... take care, sweetie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
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ah wonderful wonderful! like the double meaning "i"

although I have to confess, I missed the g-h reference (duh I know) Maybe, if it is not just me, you might consider italicizing or using quotes to show the alphabet reading?

rich poem, cc

:)

~as

TzaraTzaraalmost 18 years ago
Oh, my...

...but this is, um, tasty.

It's rather warm in here, isn't it?

The Mystery ValiantThe Mystery Valiantalmost 18 years ago
like a "RED VINE"

Ooooooooo! Double-entendrés (not too sure about spelling), all over the place! Definitely sexy and enticing! It sings in some places and catches and traps the reader, willingly! Marvelous!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Is this the same Ida Red that Bob Wills sang about

Ida Red, Ida Red

I'm a plumb fool 'bout Ida Red

My ol' Missus swore to me

When she died she'd set me free

She lived so long her head got bald

She took a notion not to die at all

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In any case a nice effort - great images.

Thanks, DJ

Bedtime StorytellerBedtime Storytelleralmost 18 years ago
Oh so vivid!

I could see it, feel it, hear it... a sensual delight!

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 18 years ago
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awesome!

the only question i have is did you mean 'heedy' or 'heady'?

wso

champagne1982champagne1982almost 18 years ago
better pie apples

than eating ones, but my mouth watered even as the stem started to break away....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
cheeky

in a nutshell, a very cheeky poem (pardon the pun)

love your SOH

you are one funny gal

xx

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