by clutching_calliope
Your talent shines more brightly than ever. Like a northern star viewed from way down Dixie way... take care, sweetie
ah wonderful wonderful! like the double meaning "i"
although I have to confess, I missed the g-h reference (duh I know) Maybe, if it is not just me, you might consider italicizing or using quotes to show the alphabet reading?
rich poem, cc
:)
~as
Ooooooooo! Double-entendrés (not too sure about spelling), all over the place! Definitely sexy and enticing! It sings in some places and catches and traps the reader, willingly! Marvelous!
Ida Red, Ida Red
I'm a plumb fool 'bout Ida Red
My ol' Missus swore to me
When she died she'd set me free
She lived so long her head got bald
She took a notion not to die at all
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In any case a nice effort - great images.
Thanks, DJ
I could see it, feel it, hear it... a sensual delight!
awesome!
the only question i have is did you mean 'heedy' or 'heady'?
wso
than eating ones, but my mouth watered even as the stem started to break away....
in a nutshell, a very cheeky poem (pardon the pun)
love your SOH
you are one funny gal
xx