All Comments on 'I Come Undone'

I loved how this whole poem flowed and pulled me in right from the start. This is beautiful eroticism indeed. I really like your style. Welcome to Lit, Bourbon! Hope to see more of your work here soon. :D

Hi! Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems Review thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=11260278#post11260278

Keep writing :)

Some parts truly amazing:

"Your heart pounds in my chest,

My mouth speaks words that have no meaning

except in darkness."

Now, that's *nice*...