by Sabina_Tolchovsky
..raw, unsentimental and uncompromising.
Poems that cause a visceral reaction are good. This poem's unwillingness to flinch makes the reader flinch.
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like a cold wind stripping the last leaves off the trees. Thanks for sharing this!
Hunter's Moon
Sabina, I bow humble~ (~_~) this is shear paramount poetry! zen of life and "Archery" <great poem> season of... a Hunter's Moon.
An excellent write;
Just goes to show,
Beware the metaphorical hunter,
Her heart's cold as the snow...
Wonderful write Sabina.. images rise forth and I felt the release of the bow string.. as the arrow made the all to familiar thud!
Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews
du lac~
and a bit chilling but worth every word of it.....nicely done sabina.......don
Remind me not to piss you off ;-)
Uncompromising. Powerful. My words are redundant Damn 5