All Comments on 'How to Fuck me'

by FieryRedhead30

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DeepAsleepDeepAsleepabout 19 years ago
This poem

is mentioned in the new poetry reviews located on the poetry discussion message board.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
YUCK

Overused phrases, trite, and not something I'd recommend publishing on this site.

Please - if you're going to write poetry, try to say something in a way it hasn't been said before.

And stop deleting comments that people have left - it's not nice. If you can't take the criticism, then perhaps you shouldn't post your crappy poems here.

sarahhhsarahhhabout 19 years ago
From one redhead to another

Hey girl, I liked your poem. It seemed REAL to me. Don't pay any attention to the phoney baloneys who the next time get laid will be in a coffin. Talk about a dead fuck! The only "off" they get is this public humilation trip. You go girl. Rock and roll and squirm and squeal. Oh, and get some troll repellant.

ReltneReltneabout 19 years ago
To: YUCK

Dear YUCK,

You wrote, "And stop deleting comments that people have left - it's not nice. If you can't take the criticism, then perhaps you shouldn't post your crappy poems here." as well as an unbidden nasty review.

All questions of the tone or validity of your comments aside, if you do not wish to be deleted perhaps you should have the mettle to post under your own name. Banal and negative comments posted anonymously are "not nice" either.

musicman77musicman77about 19 years ago
Very Nice

I really enjoyed your poem. Very nice and to the point. Sounds like a fun time.

sarahhhsarahhhabout 19 years ago
There's nothing grammatically correct about fuckin

A lot of men want good girls to talk dirty. No, not at church. In fucking bed. "Red" captured the essence of a good girl talking dirty, poetically speaking. I mean, when the panties come off who cares who has a fucking Ph.D. in English? That ain't the dangling participle that needs attention at that particular moment, 'eh guys?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
what Sarahh said

First off, I applaud your effort. To those wrist jockeys that decide to be nasty to you - all I can say is, get a life and a real woman. Guess they dont get fucked much and certainly no chance with you eh? It is easier to criticize than to create.

Jeff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Ignore the idiots..

A great poem about fucking!

What's with the attitude some of these idiots have?! If you don't like it, tough mate, others do!!

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Nice instructions...

from someone who clearly knows what she wants.

CupidsGurlCupidsGurlabout 19 years ago
Gettin out tha war paint~

Hmm~~ Just had to tell ya~~ Kuddos' to ya~~!!

Being a poet is not something everyone is cut out to be.

And I do applaude you for stickin to your

err guns *grins*

Keeep'm cummin gurl~~!

After all, *show me* is much better than spouttin' off huh..

You go gurl~~!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I really loved your poem

In my honest opinion, you mirrored my feelings on how to keep sex exciting and fun. Women enjoy sex just as much as men do. Your poem says that loud and clear. I bet your husband or boyfriend loves your fiestiness. Thanks for writing about something some women don't always want to acknowledge. Don't think twice about anyone that wrote anything negative. Not everyone is comfortable in their sexuality.

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