All Comments on 'Hospitalized'

"Every morning

it’s 14 pills

To make me

Like you

And I don’t

Like you"

ah what a line!

something happened about 3/4 of the way through, I got the feeling, wait a second,m this is getting too long. But it might just be my attention span, who knows.

interesting perspective, thank you,

sealace

reminds me a lot of Bukowski - punchy, I-don't-give-a-fuck language. Great atmosphere, great poem.

thanks for the read (~_~)