All Comments on 'hidden in my locker all year'

I saw a version of this on the passion thread and thought it looked good then.

It still is a fine poem. You've created a great atmosphere with the details you've put in. There is something quite biting yet innocent here.

The ending, though, is simply genius:

'I looked for the female teachers

but they were too busy bleeding

to tell us that there had been a horrible mistake'

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.