All Comments on 'Garden of Eden'

in fact great rhythm. The poem had a few lines like

the 5th lines in verses 1 & 3 that stopped me. sandspike

Now you have taken a moment and put a pulse to it. You have given it life and the chance to breathe. And every time someone reads it, it will grow even more. Very nicely done.

I too am a HUGE fan of Leonard Cohan -he is way up there in my top five favourites - you did a superlative job!

The rythm and the beat is superlative. The curse is trying to read it without the melody. If only I could :)

I appreciate the comment you left on mine and I loved this piece.