All Comments on 'Frosted Pain'

A passion, or passionless, and soul poem can be difficult to write. Many are overly sentimental or trite. You did quite well indeed with this one. :)

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.

window pain into the soul

very deep and nicely written

I liked your frosted pain poem~

Gelid ravishings of the dark night of the soul.. beautifully haunted memories of life past and future..

thank you for the read

Du~

Deep is the word that comes to mind. Excellent poem! Thanks for the read.

Loved it. Well chosen words presented perfectly. Thanks

You conveyed the feeling so well with such an accurate picture. Lovely frost bite.

and tasty

Good going Miss O.

*tosses Miss Oatlash a pair of skis....

Go for it babe... it's Summer on the other side ;-)

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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