All Comments on 'Force a Smile'

Fascinating poem. I liked how you moved through it, with some fabulous lines. I particularly liked the break. Leading me in one direction and then taking a turn.

"Within herself she strives for love,

To be loved and know its embrace,

To know his smell and comforting voice,

And to feel his fingers upon her face."

Beautifully seemless revelation.

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There is a poingnant honesty here that is very compelling. The sentiment is clear without being cloying, and the word choices are wonderful. Thanks, TD, I look forward to more of your writing.