All Comments on 'For You'

You do a delicious job of taking ordinary images and twisting them, and then doing the same with the sentiment nearing the end of the poem.

a very good poem, nearing valentines this had a touch of love that comes with the season, thanks for the read.

wholeheartly (if I had one) agree with duckie, you are one twisted writer - yeh, I loved it

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A valentine's wish expressed like no other; mushy and romantic — not! And still it manages to unload those three little words. Go figure.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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