All Comments on 'Flight'

You have caught people's eye here already with your phrasing.

I think people may be expecting their breath to be taken away with every line, now that you've been drummed up, which is unfair.

Your writing is very good, eye-catching in spots. I look forward to more, and more.

Icarus may be beyond some of this crowd,

heh, heh, just liked - nice

A call for success that guarantees failure.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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