All Comments on 'Every..Last Drop'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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And awakens a vision

of a buxom young lass,

printed tee shirt proclaims,

"I Swallow!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Naughty, Naughty

and I loved every bit. Great write!

Curiouswife

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Mmmm Mmmmm

E***********V*************E***********R*********Y

L~~~~~~~~~~~~~A~~~~~~~~~~~~~S~~~~~~~~~~T

D**********R**********O*********P

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
riviting

wow, now that is erotic poetry "sizzlin" or is that "finger lickin' good poetry?" <grin>

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
gulp!

whew! is it hot in here?

oh, it's your poem.

...

I need a cold shower

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