All Comments on 'Distraction'

What you descibed would certainly get my attention. That kind of distraction would most certainly be welcome to me.

I really enjoyed your poem. The ending trailed off so sadly. But there's still some hope!

With that seductive approach,

He'd have to be comatose to prefer anything on that tube

To what he has in his hands!

I enjoyed this audio poem, read with a mysterious and alluring tone. Don't get me hooked on these audio poems and then fill your quota for points and quit, you could call a wayward man home with a whisper, I promise <bigrin>