All Comments on 'Distinct lack of "clink" in life'

oh heartbreaking!

I do not think the last line is necessary, as you plant the image in the mind of the reader in the title, and in the silence itself.

I love the idea of the lack of the clink. Wah!

anna

in the new poems review thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=16252040#post16252040

I agree with annaswirls' view on that last line

A degree of subtlety is called for here

For the silence speaks volumes

As no one rallies round the nice guy.

And a warm Welcome to the poetry side of Lit.