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All Comments on 'Devil's Journey'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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deathlynxdeathlynxover 17 years ago
Tender...

A sad, but touching moment!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Flushed away on a special journey to that ocean far away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Quite a slice of life

DC:

I could take the last stanza two ways. Being the eternal optimist I'll take the path of joy. Thank You Ronnie W.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
chuckleboned

he he he, this poem has several attributes, the sweet voice for one. The journey of a fish's final hour <grin cute, witty and poetic, I truely enjoyed this poem, thanks

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