All Comments on 'Chocolate In Between'

...chewy nuts and nougats. This was rather yummy. I like how chocolate metls on my fingers!!!

Your writing is very lyrical and, having heard your enchanting voice before, I know it works well with audio nuance. This one bogs down a bit in text, however. I think the utterances of passion would be better implied than stated, and much could be trimmed (the second stanza, e.g.).

Good to see you back, SM.

"Sighs don't matter"! LOL

...in the New Poems thread over at the forum.

you are one of my favorite authors on here and i just love this one. we need to have more of your work and your wonderful voice accompanying it.