All Comments on 'Burn Baby Burn'

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.

Who the hell needs mechanical toys when you tell us how to have so much fun in the peel.... I really enjoyed this write.. made me hungry and running to the market!

Du~

Bottle red heads have more fun.... honey anyone lol...

Du~

what a sexy poem, Sandspike!! wow, I need something to cool me down now, ohh, you have me aching for the beach, :P loves your poem ;)

Your wonderful poems always make me lusty. This is a gem!

Weeee! This was great! Psst...this is in the non-erotic category.

layer tenderly

tits and toes

apply generously

lips and nose <smiles>

So lead me to 'em,

these high maintenance

sun block buyers;

I volunteer to maintain 'em

And washing down edible sun block

with chardonnay; topped off with a

chocolate chip laced delight, I can see -

I'll need fresh groceries every day...........

Mmmmmmmmmmmm good.

this poem is almost as hot as tabasco sauce...haha. Well done.

the sun can tan your flesh so rare. TK U MLJ LV NV