by Selena_Kitt
the sensual sound of the audio made this poem an excellent read, I meant listen <grin
sentiment....I could have used it a few times! thanks for the read.
nice one
we lay our dreams
side by side by side
an inch thich
and many miles wide
no matter how delicous
these simmery bits of somethings
for all the ins and outs
of our despirate mouths
they never come to nothing
I liked it, I found it interesting, I listened to it a half dozen times. Poetry is something I can't do very well, but I do like to read it at times.
This made me remember my misspent youth and all the lies I believed. Thank goodness I can laugh about most of them now! Wonderful poem...thanks!