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Click hereI saw you on a starless night
Your skirts a whirlpool as you walked
My heart recognized you then
And you became my soul.
I heard you singing as you came my way
Your voice like honey floating on the wind
My heart turned over and my blood began to sing
As you approached my senses began to sway.
Dreaming, I longed for you
Now you’ve magically appeared
I reach out my hands to you
‘Cause you are my shining light.
I have sampled lust so many times before
But never has loved knocked upon my door
Yet now, enchanted I stand before you
As you sing a lovely fairy song.
Sometimes a song can leave an indelible impression on your soul that you will carry with you ~ bringing out when you need restoration.
You seem to have a certain gift
for rythmically crafting words
and in the crafting, share
your soul.
Very well done ~ it says so obviously
True Love
I think this is exactly what a poem should be. You hit all the marks with me. You evoked strong feelings as well as generated a clear picture. Your etheral feel makes this a poem that I can quickly, and fondly, relate too. Don't sell yourself shy. You write brilliantly, and I do hope that you continue to write what's true to you. As long as you do that, you can never fail.
I love the hypnotic flow of your words here, sensual and sweet. Lovely.
but I like the way your words are put together, and the rhythm you have for your feelings. I wondered if this might not easily have been classified as an erotic poem, it is so senuous to the mind.
Lots of sweetness to it, hunger, both quiet and not so quiet.