All Comments on 'As You Sing'

but I like the way your words are put together, and the rhythm you have for your feelings. I wondered if this might not easily have been classified as an erotic poem, it is so senuous to the mind.

Lots of sweetness to it, hunger, both quiet and not so quiet.

I love the hypnotic flow of your words here, sensual and sweet. Lovely.

I think this is exactly what a poem should be. You hit all the marks with me. You evoked strong feelings as well as generated a clear picture. Your etheral feel makes this a poem that I can quickly, and fondly, relate too. Don't sell yourself shy. You write brilliantly, and I do hope that you continue to write what's true to you. As long as you do that, you can never fail.

<SIGH> She is one lucky lady! ~Minx

I need someone to whisper sweet nothings like that in my ear.

You seem to have a certain gift

for rythmically crafting words

and in the crafting, share

your soul.

Very well done ~ it says so obviously

True Love

Sometimes a song can leave an indelible impression on your soul that you will carry with you ~ bringing out when you need restoration.