All Comments on 'A Small Passing'

by ohsteve

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
quite good

Very nice line: Scattered, wind blown and random

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
your poem is mentioned

in Sunday's review

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Your

choice of words makes this piece stand apart from other poems dedicated to loved ones lost. Very sweet and sad, my condolences to you.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Reminds me of a wake where people talk and say so little;

They want to be seen as so caring

Yet often haven't got a clue of whom they're talking.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
moves

A time for memories ~ before the day is over and the world moves on and on.

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