All Comments on 'A Pin-Up Girl'

Very lyrical with some fun imagery, loved the image of

'Her Coca-Cola curves'

Good stuff. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

Marvelous!

This 3rd iteration takes the best from the previous versions {"Pin-Up Girl" and "She's a Pin-Up Girl"} and tightens up considerably; now it's not overwhelmed by the repetition. The imagery works in concert with the repetition.

And here I almost missed this. I'm glad I caught vampiredust's review today. Well done!

a sensual delight. evocative images

~Syn

A Pin-Up Girl with everything going for her. Good Looks, sensuous ~ all the world's her stage. Bright happy images abound.

Will quench your thirst... and bring grown men to their knees, panting and thrashing for a better glimse.