All Comments on 'A Moment'

deep with in the beauty of the writing the hurt of reality lurks....well done again

Your poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the literary journey, Art~

It's been some time

Since your first submission, "Contemplation."

This is another equally moving piece;

a "must read" for every married man.

Random thoughts do not make poetry. There are some nice ideas here, just very badly written.

Using moment carefully ~ set aside a few to say ~ I love you.

Lovely rendering revealing what's really important.

almost singing out for his love..his attention. But alas the flame is flickering and the fire may go out.