by irishcatsmeow
this poem has been mentioned in the new poems review today. thanks for posting
purring kitty?
nicely done~
sort of tantalizing
mixed with endearment~
tantadearment~
There is more than one way to read this poem. However you see it it's a great work. Good job irish!
~an outward manifestation
of discontent and unease.
Pain personified.~
~Despair’s deluge
leads to transformation;
a cleansing of demons
false witnesses;~
I could go on
Maybe 1 verse too long...but I don't know what verse I'd get rid of.
You've really found your voice with this one
Thank you
: )
Overpowering sadness and grief ~ overcome almost unable to remember to take a breath. Tears like rain can make the flowers of forgiveness grow.