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All Comments on 'A Captain's Hand'

by RJMasters

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sacksackover 19 years ago
very vivid

I can almost feel the water spraying in my face! Loved it!

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
Great metaphor...

after the first stanza, i wasn't thinking about you controlling a ship. Captivating images.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Your poem is mentioned

in Sunday's New Poems Review

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Wow

Very clever, I love the seamless dual images, nicely done!

A Desert RoseA Desert Roseover 19 years ago
Inspired

Very nice and congratulations.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Quite a metaphor

Riding her through the storm...

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