by My Erotic Trail
in the archive thread and enjoyed the read.
I like the images you toss out for me,
'Cast upon an ocean of white, I write
glass words, reflective and transparent.'
such a lot to say in the first two lines.
Well done. Keep up the growth. Stretch yourself and keep your eyes open, trust me, you'll enjoy the journey.
wso
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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Throw a bottle on the creative Sea ~ perhaps it will return with thoughts -ideas - inspiration to write. I especially was in awe of the word play in the lines below:
Castaway, marooned in my dreams
an ocean of endless possibilities.
Nice piece of imagery here
Up to the part of the
Bottle poetry risking the
Kiss of jagged rock...
A really good piece of writing, conjured up some great pictures.
I love this one Art.
I feel a great deal of emotion
and the imagery here is breath taking.
Just a loverly write full of passion.
Very nice pen ...
record the poets' journey well, MET. I liked the imagery you've put in, esp details such as 'I write
glass words, reflective and transparent'
such sublime images
Thanks for the lovely read, mentioned in today's new poem reviews
inspired a high haiku river pen for you...nicely penned I like the flow and the message rocks the waves in the night...big sigh...blue