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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mentioned

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey ...

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 19 years ago
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I don't understand this here:

"A virus of add-ware in our society

read the signs, the books don't ryhme.

This in Hebrew brewed."

I would rework this, you are on to something

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
self sacrifice

For sacrificing of life ~ 20 virgins await you.

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