All Comments on 'Clothesline'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
GREAT ACCOUNT

Great story and true account of how leather and BDSM should start - slow and building. The mind is a great place for a fuck.

31133113over 18 years ago
Beautiful!

This is a FANTASTIC story! Warm, genuine, funny, charming. There are so many layers to this story, and yet they are presented in a way that is beautifully minimalist. This story, like the sex presented, gives only as much as is needed to excite. Nicely done.

31133113over 18 years ago
Beautiful!

This is a FANTASTIC story! Warm, genuine, funny, charming. There are so many layers to this story, and yet they are presented in a way that is beautifully minimalist. This story, like the sex presented, gives only as much as is needed to excite. Nicely done.

Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaover 17 years ago
I started grinning from the first paragraph on...

I know that BDSM isn't popularly supposed to be sweet- but-

this is a honey of a tale.

And Gerth's dilemma is so common. And how many of us get lucky enough to have such a perceptive neighbor?

This is going on my favorites list!

FlamesEmbraceFlamesEmbraceover 13 years ago

Absolutely loved it. =3 Would adore seein' more about these two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

Amazing story. Very well written. I would love to read more about these two. Please write more.

TheSecretPervertTheSecretPervertabout 12 years ago

That was funny, cute, amazing, and awesome!

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

i fell asleep reading this rubbish

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love this...

Gerth is so cute!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
i agree its all in the mind

I loved how you left enough hints and suggestions in your writing for me to fill in the blanks as to what was happening and how it was wanted from both ends

I filled in the blanks and very enjoyed it

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