- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Breathe In, Breathe Out
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Click hereThis is my very first poem, and I hope all of you enjoy it. Much thanks to Vella and Sis, who helped me with this wonderful process. I love you both.
Breathe In, Breathe Out
I breathe
In, out
Glistening skin, butterflies soaring high
accompany my beating heart as I first lay eyes on you.
And your eyes, your eyes
pouring over completion with each brazen glance.
I breathe
In, out
Sailing effortlessly into those arms, delighting in your smile,
I revel in these imaginings as I await your company
and your thoughts,
Forcing me to grow in a way I never imagined possible.
I breathe
In, out
Distinct outbursts of sound
breaking the innate silence as we make love,
entangled in that maze of billowy sheets.
And your voice, your voice
uttering the three words I never had the courage to announce.
I breathe
In, out
The feel of your lips caressing mine,
the nuzzles that await me each morning
I carry around like an added accessory
And your touch, your touch
Oh, your touch, graceful, enrapturing, perpetually tender.
I breathe
In, out
As I envision the unknown
So brash, inexperienced, and young.
Awaiting the day I will be forced to catch my breath.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoVery good first try
Shows much potential and talent here;
Keep on submitting.
Honey123over 17 years agoWonderful poem...and you're first time!!! Congratulations!!And thank you for submitting this wonderful poem!
Honey
deathlynxover 17 years agoI love the repeated theme beginning each stanza!
Very powerful, very emotional, very descriptive!
Salvor-Hardonover 17 years agoYou did a great job of capturing the paradox of love, that it can be as simple as breathing and yet so overwhelming to take our breath away.
Wonderful introduction.
lucky-E-levenover 17 years agoI've felt this way before, and you illustrated the moment so nicely it was like being back there again. Beautiful images and sentiments you've painted here, Rae. Great first submission. I'm proud.
~lucky
